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Literature Text

good enough
isn't
i don't want to settle for almost.

question: would it be more effective if i added another "enough" at the end?
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I think it's better without the extra 'enough'. I think it would take away from the strenghth of 'isn't'.
I like the way it's spaced out. :) The 'isn't' is just so strong, like a thump in the idea of what I thought it would say.